You have recently moved to a different city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you decided to move to a different city Describe the new city and accommodation Ask your friend to arrange a visit You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Dear Jassu, How are you? I hope everything is going well and you’re in good health. I’m writing to let you know that I have moved to Brampton! As you know,

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city has always been my dream place to live. I

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applied for a job in childcare and I’m happy to say that I got selected. Brampton has a lot more amenities than Caledon. The area I chose to live in has many different types of stores—especially Punjabi stores, which is great because I really miss Punjabi food! There are

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many shopping centres, and the best part is that the bus stop is very close to my house. I moved here within the

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four or five days, and I need your help. Since I’m new to the area, I don’t know much about the bus system or how things work here. Could you visit me soon and help me get settled? Looking forward to seeing you. Take care of yourself! Your friend, Jass

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coherence and cohesion

Add a clear explanation before mentioning the job for better flow.

task response

Include more details about the city to make it vibrant.

coherence and cohesion

Great greeting and closing in the letter!

task achievement

Very friendly and inviting tone.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

167 words

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You have recently moved to a different city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you decided to move to a different city Describe the new city and accommodation Ask your friend to arrange a visit You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination, while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, more and more people have to compete with young people for the same jobs. what problems could this situation cause? what solutions you can suggest?

Some people think that governments should invest mainly in making public transportation faster while others think there are more important priorities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many people assume that the goal of every country should be to produce more materials and goods. To what extent do you agree or disagree that constantly increasing production is an appropriate goal?