You have recently moved to a different city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you decided to move to a different city Describe the new city and accommodation Ask your friend to arrange a visit You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Dear Jassu, How are you? I hope everything is going well and you’re in good health. I’m writing to let you know that I have moved to Brampton! As you know,
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applied for a job in childcare and I’m happy to say that I got selected. Brampton has a lot more amenities than Caledon. The area I chose to live in has many different types of stores—especially Punjabi stores, which is great because I really miss Punjabi food! There are
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many shopping centres, and the best part is that the bus stop is very close to my house. I moved here within the
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four or five days, and I need your help. Since I’m new to the area, I don’t know much about the bus system or how things work here. Could you visit me soon and help me get settled? Looking forward to seeing you. Take care of yourself! Your friend, Jass

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coherence and cohesion
Add a clear explanation before mentioning the job for better flow.
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Include more details about the city to make it vibrant.
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Great greeting and closing in the letter!
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Very friendly and inviting tone.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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