Some universities offer online courses as an alternative to classes delivered on campus. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Certain educational institutes provide a distance learning scheme through online

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courses which can be an alternate way of institutional

studies

, which can be taught in the university's premises. I personally reckon that rendering online

study

has good and bad aspects, which I can explicate in the following paragraphs through some practical examples.

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online

studies

is that it confers the great opportunity to teach

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students

from every corner of the world, which can be delivered at any time, anywhere, and

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condition.

This

can be simplified by saying that

on campus

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studies

can be taught

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the

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particular time and at the same place which is

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a classroom

study

. For illustration, in order to provide an education in

this

pandemic situation, there are

the

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numerous universities

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use

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platform to continue their

studies

through various intermediate platforms

such

as Microsoft Teams, Zoom, Google Meet, etc.

Furthermore

, due to

such

development

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we see

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usage

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of fossil fuel consumptions, which can improve the quality of air in our environment.

On the other hand

, distance learning has

the

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certain shortcomings which can not underestimate by scholars and

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teachers

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Firstly

, scholars believe that there

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plenty of

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come when pursuing

study

through online mode, which can be reduced the focus of

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hence

the pupils can not

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during the lectures.

For instance

, there are

the

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few cases where learners encounter background noises

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drop their attention from the

study

Secondly

, some education providers say that sometimes

students

just join the class for showing their availability.

Such

as,

students

do other recreational activities when their classes are running, just putting their audio on mute and disable their video so that they do whatever they want during their live classes.

Finally

, online

studies

rerequisite

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the internet connection and other gadgets like laptop, microphone and camera, which make the online

study

a little expensive, and

this

development become costly for economically deprived people. To conclude, online

study

is one of the best

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to learn

students

from anywhere without going to the university's campus but I think every development has

the

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negative aspects.

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, online

study

can not

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the way of classes

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deliver on campus earlier.

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