Even when poor countries get help from rich countries, hunger is Steel an issue. Discuss the problem, cause, and solutions. Support your answer with specific reasons and example.

It cannot be denied that hunger is steel and issue, another rich notion are helping the poor one's.
This
essay will explicate the two causes of
this
phenomena and explain how we can tackle these obstacles in the coming years.
Firstly
, the primary reason for
this
occurrence is corruption in each level of the management which means that the donation amount could not be reached to the people who are actually in need. To mitigate it, the possible reason to halt
this
situation requires legal authority investigation as the government can impose some legal laws to maintain the dirt straits created by the corporate offices.
Likewise
, the donation money provided by the foreign country can be preserved by making new legal laws. Another problem is the habit of using other's money.
In other words
, some people don't try to work hard for their earnings due to the easy way of receiving income.
For instance
, a recent study of a media channel, NTV had revealed that 75% of individual in slum area are unemployed because of their habit of staying at home
instead
of searching for jobs. To cope with
this
, peoples attitude should be changed to forage compromise with their behaviour to protect the neediest people who are literally poor.
In addition
, the government should
also
consider the reduction of the situation. Taking everything into consideration, it is clear that cooperation and a negative habit often leads to dire straits.
Besides
, these problems can be solved if human try to
to
Remove the redundancy
apply
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maintain their behaviour in a positive way.
Submitted by Aashish Karki on

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