Your next-door neighbor likes to listen to music late at night. Because of the loud music, you often lose sleep. Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter Describe the situation Explain the problem it is causing you Offer at least one solution

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Dear Mr Kornienko, I am writing to express my discontent with my neighbour who is living above me.Unfortunately, he likes to listen to loud music at midnight.

Firstly

, I think that

this

is a new neighbour

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because a few months ago in that flat lived a nice family, which were noiseless and it was a pleasure to have

such

neighbours. I noticed that

this

new man is young and he is keen on having parties with loud music, which is annoying.You can understand my frustration when I and my wife with 2 years old daughters are trying to sleep and hear a bass coming from his room and quite noisy laughings.

Moreover

, loss of sleep can cause headaches which I have, because of that guy.

Secondly

, I would like to suggest you go to his apartment.Talk to him about turning off his speakers after 6 o'clock and give

first

and

last

warning.

Otherwise

, he will have to be evicted. I am looking forward to hearing from you that you have taken the necessary steps to deal with

this

problem to maintain the reputation and quality of your building company. Yours faithfully, Saveliy

Dychenko

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Dyachenko

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