You ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago, but you have received nothing. Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the cheque book. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the manager what action he will take over this matter.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

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letter to express my dissatisfaction with the poor service which I have received after placing the new

chequebook

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order request. Almost two weeks back, I placed an advance order for a new

chequebook

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at your bank as I was about to consume my current

chequebook

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. I

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raised

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request through your online application form and got the confirmation number once the request

got

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submitted successfully. Since I was aware of my situation and my business nature, where most of the transactions are done through cheques only, I applied for a new

chequebook

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well in advance.

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, I did not receive anything nor any intimation from the bank officials about

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delay.

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not having

this

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important document, I have already started losing my contracts.

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, please let me know

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apply

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when can I get my newly applied

chequebook

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, I would like to complain in the strongest terms about the unsatisfactory service that I received from your bank officials. I would appreciate it if you could give your immediate attention to

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matter, and I would be grateful to know what actions you will be planning to take. I look forward to receiving your explanation. Your’s

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, Arsh

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Work on varying sentence structures to enhance readability and engagement.

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Ensure consistency in addressing the recipient, such as using 'Sir/Madam' or a specific title/name.

task achievement

You have clearly stated the issue and provided relevant details.

suitable writing tone

The letter maintains a polite yet firm tone, appropriate for a formal complaint.

coherence cohesion

The paragraphs are logically structured and linked, aiding comprehension.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

206 words

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