Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

Nowadays, some

countries

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becoming

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host

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a host

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for international

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events, which were received a huge attraction from other people.

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, some opinion

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with

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statement, saying that

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trend has some drawbacks for

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are hosting. In

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essay, I will discuss both

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and explain why the country will gain more merits when they become a

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. On the one hand, I understand that the

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celebrating a

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event will face several problems.

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, the government must spend more money to invest in standard facilities to adapt

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condition of the competition in the

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.

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,

host

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countries

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must expand or even built high-quality stadium with huge volume seats, which require special employees from the construction field to complete the plan in a short time.

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, the precise is that appearing more bad situations like theft, accidents traffic because the number of visiting people

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overloaded at the same time.

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, some negative problem was led to the safety protection in

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becoming less efficient, the reasons why the representative

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badly in the eyes of foreigners around the

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.

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, in spite of some demerits in the

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, I claim that the positive effect of the

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will outweigh the other side.

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with, becoming a

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country in

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even play a crucial role in the development of the

sports

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field, which can assess the giant volume of viewers in the

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both online and offline. To clarify that, the number of

sport

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fans from over the

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will reunion in the

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countries

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to take part in the events,

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, the hospitality industry has an opportunity to operate maximumly, and the developing economy continually

rising

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follow

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event. In conclusion,

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some drawback in the organizational process,

but

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it really not ignored with the benefits which

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gained. I think becoming a

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in a

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events will have more opportunity for developing of the

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, so the government should control the safety of the area to make sure the organization took place smoothly.