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The ways people interact with each other have been changing dramatically for the past thirty years because of text messaging. In what ways has text messaging affected the types of interactions people have? Has this become a positive or negative development?

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Text messaging has completely changed the way of communication between
people
 for the
last
 three decades.
This
 fact caused some significant changes in the ways
people
 interact nowadays,
such
 as increasing the
distant
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 interactions and decreasing face to face meetings. In my opinion, it has more advantages due to the convenience to
people
. There is a significant difference in how
people
 communicate with each other now compared to the past. The number of live talks is reduced drastically because the need in appointing meetings becomes unnecessary with the appearance of the Internet and the email boxes.
For example
, almost all business connections are going through emails or companies’ text chats in the present days.
Furthermore
, it is easier not to lose contact with a person due to some circumstances which might lead to moving to another country or city.
Thus
, a possibility to send a message to any point of the world erases the borders. I believe that the way how communication among
people
 changed has a positive impact on our lives.
In other words
, it is more convenient to leave a message without bothering someone and receive a response later when it will be appropriate to the other person.
For instance
, if I do not know for sure whether the person is free at that moment, I prefer to text in order to avoid the situation which might disturb them.
Also
, you have
a
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 possibility to check everything you have written before and,
as a result
, to deal with some situations more easily. In conclusion, in spite of the fact that the level of interaction between
people
 is absolutely different than it was before, I think that it brings more positive aspects to
people
’s lives.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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