Many people believe that social networking sites (such as facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?

one of the state-of-the-art technological developments in the 21st century is the emergent of social media. Others argue that

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innovation has brought a large-scale of negative effects to people as well as to the community.

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I agree

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the statement,

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could not

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deny the fact that

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digital media has tremendous advantages too. The social networking page has become an open-source of bullying. In the past few years, there have been many cases of cyberbullying that

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affected the mental health of

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individuals. To exemplify, many teenagers have experienced

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named and shamed in their own accounts.

As a result

, they feel a profound sadness and the feeling that they have been gaslighted which lead them to question their worth.

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,

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and

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have served as an open ground to air the sentiments of

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society.

For example

, private issues of

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being known by many in just a single post, it becomes the subject of discussion of netizens who are not even part of it.

Hence

, leading to a more chaotic

situation

.

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there are disadvantages, its contribution to the individuals is highly regarded.

Firstly

,

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provides entertainment and relieves stress

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during

this

pandemic.

For instance

, funny videos and news can make someone laugh and temporarily forgets the current

situation

.

Thus

, decreasing the chance to suffer from depression.

Secondly

, one of the greatest advantages of

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technological improvement is that it connects people from one place to another virtually. In today's

situation

in where

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the pandemic

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is still on the rise, there is a vast number of people who were not able to go home due to the strict regulations.

However

, families were able to attend birthday parties, wedding anniversaries and even funerals with the aid of live video recording. In conclusion, social networking sites have positive and negative effects . I agree that it undoubtedly brought undesirable impacts to both individuals and

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society.

Nonetheless

, the positive side

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helped us to cope up with today's

situation

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