Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: •explain what you are currently doing •describe your suitability for this area of work •say when you can attend an interview

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Dear Sir, I hope

this

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letter finds you in best of the spirits and radiant health. I am writing

this

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letter to let you know that I am interested in applying for the position of

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apply

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chef in your hotel. Currently, I am employed as an Assistant Chef in the hotel Clarks

inn

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Inn

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. I have been working in

food

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the food

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industry

from

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for

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the

last

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five years. I did a few courses from

a renowned cookery schools

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renowned cookery schools

a renowned cookery school

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in the UK and since

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I have been working.

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, I hold a Bachelor's degree in Food Science, which not only

enable

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enables

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me to understand the nutrition part of

the

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apply

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food but

also

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enhance

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enhances

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my cooking skills. I am keen to work with your hotel and

therefore

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, I am willing to appear for a formal interview next week if it is convenient

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for

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you,as I will be able to showcase my credentials in person. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Jatinder.

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coherence cohesion

Ensure that all sentences flow logically and that there are smooth transitions between paragraphs. Some sentences could be rephrased for clearer connections.

task achievement

Avoid minor grammatical errors such as 'from the last five years' which should be 'for the last five years'. Small errors can cause confusion and affect clarity.

task achievement

The letter provides a clear and complete response to the task, addressing all three bullet points effectively.

task achievement

The tone of the letter is professional and suitable for a job application, demonstrating good command of formal language.

coherence cohesion

The letter begins with a polite greeting and ends with a respectful closing, which contributes to the overall professionalism.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

161 words

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