Some people believe that educational qualifications always bring success, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Education
plays a pivotal role in humans life.There has been a debate between two groups of individuals,
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one believes that tertiary qualifications always bring success,the others contend that practical knowledge always plays a crucial role in people lives.Which one of the ideologies is worth supporting- is the question?
This
essay not only intends to discuss them both but
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my opinion at the end. The conspicuous reason as to why a section of society holds a belief that higher
education
is important to achieve the goal in their life.It means if a person
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he or she get the job easily either in government or private sector.Nowadays individuals always prefer government job,so tertiary
education
is compulsory to get state vacancy.
For instance
,
Last
year I had seen the post in 'The Hindu' newspaper that higher authorities were looking for graduate candidates for the railway jobs, I had recently completed my graduation and filled the form.After 2 months I selected for the T.T. post on the railway.
Therefore
,
education
brings success in human life.
However
, opponents have conflicting views as they should have great practical skills.To add more, if people have good practical knowledge the former can easily start their own business and creates many jobs for the others who are unemployed.
For example
, owner of the PayPal developed the app with their own hand experience.
Although
he is not a graduate,he has great knowledge of the language.It was the best project developed by him and now he is the youngest person in the country who made the billionaire in his early forties. To conclude, even though both the groups have their valid justifications, I am in favour of those who opine that practical skills are more significant than
education
.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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  • In conclusion
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