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Some scientists think that there are intelligent life forms on other planets and messages should be sent to contact them while other scientists think that is a bad idea and it would be dangerous. Discuss both the views and give your opinion

#scientists #life #forms #planets #messages #contact #idea
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some scientists consider that there is intuitive
life
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 on other
planets
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 like
earth
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 and it would be beneficial for us to connect with them but others disapprove of
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 notion
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 they consider it as a hazardous idea. Here, in
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 both views will be discussed along with my idea. On one hand, connecting with other plants could be favourable as their
resources
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 can be utilized for human
life
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 betterment. As with the population growth, Natural
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 consumption has been increased which may
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from result
 the depletion of
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 in coming years. So , if we take alternative sources from them it will help to maintain the
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sustainability
 of natural
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. If the interaction with the
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 on other celestial bodies has a positive impact on human
beings
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, it will be good but there is no guarantee for
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 kind of positive relationship is just an expectation. If extraterrestrial
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 are superior to us, they are more likely to have a destructive effect on us. Superior species always dominate inferior species just like human
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 dominate other forms of
life
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 on
earth
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. Many other living
beings
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 on
earth
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 are under threat of extinction as human
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 are superior to them.
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, extraterrestrial
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 may wipe out human
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 from the
earth
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.
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, great scientists
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 as Stephen Hawking have already given us warning against interaction with
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 forms on other
planets
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. Human
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 can live happily on
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 planet if they utilize natural
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 wisely
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 of exploiting them. There is no need to search for
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 from another planet when there is no guarantee that they can help the human species. In conclusion, in my opinion, relationship with
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 on other
planets
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 may have negative effects on
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 on
earth
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. It is better to use the
resources
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 on
earth
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 wisely and live here happily
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 of trying to colonize other
planets
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • extraterrestrial
  • investigate
  • interstellar
  • speculate
  • communication
  • primitive
  • potential
  • collaboration
  • unlock
  • unprecedented
  • advancement
  • caution
  • consequences
  • hostile
  • unknowingly
  • civilization
  • disrupt
  • evolution
  • preserve
  • ponder
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