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TODAY MOBILE DEVICES AND SOCIAL MEDIA ARE INCREASINGLY BEING USED TO COMMUNICATE WITH OTHER PEOPLE essay

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Nowadays, smartphones and other electronics have become increasingly popular and it has been used to communicate with
friends
 and family members.
This
 essay will discuss the drawbacks associated with
this
 and provide a viable solution.
Firstly
, everyone
one
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is having a mobile phone with data since it's available at a lower cost in the market.Telecommunication provider
also
 offering numerous free calling and chatting application for a discounted price.
Consequently
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 the public is addicted to these type of social medial and keep on communicating with
friends
, colleagues, and relatives rather than meet them personally and it's affecting their health badly . For ,example the latest Newspaper surveys say that 75% of the younger age generation having eye strain and other eye-related diseases, because of spending more time on social media in order to chat with their
friends
. The solution to
this
 problem is, Parents and guardians should keep eye on their children to control the usage of electronic devices.
In addition
 to that families and communities should plan for a get together very often in order to meet face to face rather than internet or mail.
For instance
, recently
one
 private tv channel interviewed
one
 group of
people
 and they answered that they will arrange
one
 small fun event once a month in order to meet their
friends
 and they organise some bonding events to develop their relationship, even though there are many online media to contact them . , To conclude, In my opinion ,Despite being in contact with
people
 online, Some times we need to communicate in Person. Private happiness centre and society
also
 can arrange some program to promote the live events and
people
 gathered ,So that younger generation
people
 will stop using mobiles and it will reduce the addiction rate .
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