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Some scientists think that there are intelligent life forms on other planets and messages should be sent to contact them while other scientists think that is a bad idea and it would be dangerous. Discuss both the views and give your opinion

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some scientists consider that there is intuitive
life
 on other
planets
 like
earth
 and it would be beneficial for us to connect with them but others disapprove of
this
 notion. In my opinion, trying to interact with
life
 forms on another globe may have dismissive impacts on human growth and it is better to avoid it. Scientists are trying their best to connect with other
planets
 for favourable reasons. As their resources can be utilized for human
life
 betterment.
For Instance
, As with the population growth, consumption of natural resources has increased. ‘The times’ recently predicted by 2065, almost all the natural abundance, including water and air will be depleted leaving the land not suitable for inhabitants. So , if we take alternative sources from other spheres it will be a great help for the human population on
earth
. on the flip side, extraterrestrial
life
 is worth to know but it is
also
 assumed that their force is more intelligent. Certainly, they can be an outrageous danger to our planet. They don't share a common language with us so communicate with them can lead to misunderstanding between us. Not only that, their technology could be superior to us they can remove human existence on
earth
.
For instance
, many UFOs have been sighting recently, we do not know what is coming on our way. In conclusion, in my opinion, relationship with
life
 on other
planets
 may have negative effects on
life
 on
earth
. It is better to use the resources on
earth
 wisely and live here happily
instead
 of trying to colonize other
planets
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • extraterrestrial
  • investigate
  • interstellar
  • speculate
  • communication
  • primitive
  • potential
  • collaboration
  • unlock
  • unprecedented
  • advancement
  • caution
  • consequences
  • hostile
  • unknowingly
  • civilization
  • disrupt
  • evolution
  • preserve
  • ponder
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