Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
In these modern days, people’s love for
music
has united them with others who have different cultures and ages. Use synonyms
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, I personally agree with Linking Words
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music
has become a tool that can be utilized to unite Use synonyms
nation
for some reasons which are set out below.
Everyone has a different taste in Correct article usage
a nation
music
, and there are different types of Use synonyms
music
genres, Use synonyms
such
as K-pop, J-pop, Rock, Lofi, Jazz, and so on. Finding something in common will help them to build a relationship with others. Linking Words
For instance
, K-Poppers' fans can somehow manage to interact with each other globally with the help of the internet, and some of them even become Linking Words
friends
, despite their age and cultural differences. They even can form a fan group about a certain artist with strangers to fangirl over Use synonyms
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idol and to defend his idol if they get hate comments from other fan groups.
Other than contemporary Linking Words
music
, traditional Use synonyms
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also
helped people to connect with a foreign culture. The curiosity of someone to learn about other traditional Linking Words
music
will open the opportunity to find new Use synonyms
friends
and community. Use synonyms
For example
, a year ago, there was a viral video where an American was singing an Indonesian folk song. He Linking Words
then
told the media that his love for Indonesia's art had attracted local children to teach him the culture’s Linking Words
music
. Use synonyms
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end
the Indonesians loved him for his interest in the country's cultures, and he ended up with some new Add a comma
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friends
.
In conclusion, it seems to me that Use synonyms
music
has brought people together globally. Through engaging with it, individuals can find new Use synonyms
friends
and build relationships across cultures and generations. Use synonyms
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, it is Linking Words
also
important to recognize that personal preferences and cultural differences in Linking Words
music
may sometimes limit its unifying potential. Despite Use synonyms
this
, the Linking Words
overall
ability of Linking Words
music
to create shared experiences and emotional connections makes it a powerful tool for fostering unity in a diverse world.Use synonyms
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relevant specific examples
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logical structure
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introduction conclusion present
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supported main points
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