You are going to move out of your apartment in a English-speaking country. Your landlord is a very good person, who has assisted you a lot during your stay. Meanwhile, your friend would like to rent the flat after you. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter, •Let your landlord know that you will be leaving •Thank you landlord for his/her help •Tel him/her about your friend

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Dear Mr Rakesh, I am writing to inform you that I will be vacating the apartment by next month's end. I am happy to inform you that I have accepted the role of private banker in a prestigious investment banking firm in my home country, India, so I will be shifting to India by the 27th of May, 2024. I genuinely appreciated all your help during my beautiful stay in London. You have been very considerate toward me.

Also

helped me emotionally and financially on various occasions and because of your considerate nature I never felt like, I was staying away from home. One of my school friends, Ajay, is actively for an apartment in London . He has been admitted to London Univerity and planning to shift in starting of June. He can be a suitable replacement for your apartment.

Firstly

, I have known him personally since my school days, He prefers cleanliness and maintains hygiene.

Additionally

, He is a very well-behaved and mature person who is dedicated towards his studies. Please revert to my letter if you would like me to schedule a meeting with my friend. Best wishes, Sandeep

Submitted by sandeepniet17 on Sat Jun 01 2024

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coherence cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph contains a single main idea to improve clarity.

coherence cohesion

Consider using more varied sentence structures and vocabulary to enhance your writing.

task achievement

You addressed the task fully by informing the landlord about your move, expressing gratitude, and introducing your friend.

task achievement

Your tone is appropriate and courteous throughout the letter.

coherence cohesion

The letter has a clear structure with a greeting, body paragraphs, and a closing.

coherence cohesion

Your closing statement is polite and effectively invites further communication.

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

192 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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