Some people think that it is good for a country's culture to import foreign movies and TV programmes. Other think than it is better to produce these locally. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

since the human civilisation
culture
is a treasure to mankind.
people
love to know about their ethnic background. the modern world is interconnected with
people
from different backgrounds. the younger generation is optimistic to adapt to new cultural values and habits. we will try to explore how
people
are reacting to different cultures around the globe' ,
Obviously
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there are some merits if we import outside cultural valuation because
people
will get a fair chance to interact with something new. the other important factor is the language which is the output of old ethnic habitats. acceptance is a key to explore different dimensions of language. for ,example old
people
used to say if you want to learn the mother-tongue of a country learn their
culture
first
. broadcasting foreign cultural values will have a better and long-lasting effect on
people
. if we talk about demerits foreign
culture
can cause serious damage and can be threatening to native cultural traditions. because some traditions are considered legal and just in Muslim countries but western countries oppose
such
practices
. for ,instance female mutilation is common practice among Muslim traditions which is compulsory for all women. these
practices
are life-threatening and in the developed ,world it is a serious offence. so think twice before introducing any foreign
culture
' I am in the opinion that
such
culture
sharing
practices
are a sensitive issue and it requires formal certification from the government to avoid the adoption of illicit
practices
.
culture
sharing should be restricted to countries with well define cultural value so that we can learn something better and serve our
people
healthy
practices
.
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  • cultural exchange
  • enriches
  • diverse perspectives
  • storytelling methods
  • spur creativity
  • innovation
  • genres
  • styles
  • over-reliance
  • undermine
  • overshadow
  • cultural homogenization
  • national identity
  • local talent
  • linguistic relevance
  • relatable
  • accessible
  • domestic audience
  • preserve
  • cultural identity
  • promote
  • balanced approach
  • cultural landscape
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