You are writing to an old family friend to ask him/her to attend your birthday party. Write a letter to invite your friend and: • Tell your friend about the party you are having for your birthday • Explain how important it is for you that he/she attends • Suggest that your friend can stay at the hotel next to the venue during the visit

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Dear Sara, How have you been? I missed the wonderful time we had together at the school. I thought I

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a birthday

party

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on 21 June and I

wish

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wanted

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to attend

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party

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party

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will be held at White Venue on Ka Street.

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party

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is my 30th birthday and it has a sentimental value for me.

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, I believe it would be a tremendous experience for both of us. Because of some unique specifications, all my guests would have a special level for me. I will consider the best place and the glamourous menu for food.

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, you are attending

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party

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is very important to me. It would be a blast. In terms of accommodation, I bet you won't have any concerns.

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venue is in the vicinity of The Blue Hotel. If you want, I can stay at

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hotel next to the venue during the visit. I hope you can make it up to come to my

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, Best wishes. Mahsid

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suggestion

Your letter generally flows well, but some sentences could be clearer. For example, instead of 'I wish to attend this party,' try 'I would be delighted if you could attend this party.'

suggestion

Try to elaborate a bit more on why this birthday is so important to you and what makes it a 'tremendous experience.'

writing tone

The letter is polite and friendly, which is suitable for the context of writing to an old friend.

content completeness

You included all the necessary information about the party, its importance, and accommodation options.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

168 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

reconnect
celebration
meaningful
cherish
special occasion
accommodation
venue
significance
memorable
anticipate
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