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Society is based on rules and laws. It could not function if individuals were free to do whatever they wanted to do. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Community is based on regulation and legislation. It would not operate if people were unbound to do anything they wished to. I unequivocally agree with
such
a statement because it would affect
tax
collection, and traffic would be unmanageable. The
first
reason for my agreement is that if humans do things according to them, they will pay minimal
tax
or no
tax
.
This
would affect the government treasury, resulting in poor infrastructure, appealing medical service, and an inferior education system.
Moreover
, the government spent the collected
tax
on the poor by providing multifarious subsidies.
For example
, a survey by the University of Dubai revealed that 95 per cent of people were not willing to pay taxes if they could make their own decision. The
further
reason is that it would cause vehicle concessions all over the country. If individuals were unbound with motor law, they would drive on the wrong side of the road, not follow signals, park vehicle where they wished to,
consequently
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would cause a menace to the whole society's development.
Further
, at the time of the catastrophic event, ambulance, fire brigade, and police will not reach the location on time. To illustrate, a recent article in Times Now stated that 25 per cent of Indian woman could not reach hospital during the labour pain and delivered the baby while stuck in traffic. To conclude, I firmly believe that giving freedom to people in the society will affect the motor rules and non-collection of taxes will occur.
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