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Some countries invest in specialized training centers for top athletes rather than in public sports facilities. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

#countries #centers #athletes #sports #facilities #development
Sports
 is the primary factor of every nation.
Players
 are the pride of every country because they can only make proud to their country.
However
, a fair amount of people think that some countries are put money into
in
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specific practice
centers
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 for the top
sports
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sportsperson
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person
 rather than in public
sports
 resources. I think undoubtedly
this
 is
a
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positive growth. On the one hand, there are many reasons
for
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why
this
 trend is best.
Firstly
, the best
players
 are always special for every society because they are only played for
country
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 proud and they can get more models and prize to international
competitation
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competition
competitions
. Even top
athlets
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athletes
are represent
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 the community
that is
 why the government is given more focus to
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sports
 fitness
person
such
 as sink money into unusual
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tuition
center
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 for only top competitors.
Furthermore
,
this
 kind of
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sports
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sportsperson
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person
 will need long time practice with
best
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 coacher in order to they will perform with full effort
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as a result
 they can obtain more
medels
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medals
models
 to their own nation.
For example
, many countries are spent a lot of wages on unique
sports
 recreational
center
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such
 as
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the top
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top most
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topmost
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equipments
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equipment
types of equipment
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,
world
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 best coacher, healthy
nutrition
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 foods
also
.
On the other hand
,
public
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finess
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fitness
center
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 is not helpful for
best
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players
 due to
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lack of resources and gamer concentration will
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 when they are being
practiced
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practised
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 in a public
center
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centre
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.
This
 is a good way of encourage
to
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the athletes in order to they can utilize the modern
equipments
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equipment
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 it is not possible to the common
center
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.
For instance
, one of the best cricket player who
sachin
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tendulkar
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 had been staying
notable
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 physical
excercise
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exercise
 academy during his
traning
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training
 period
in
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 many days
as a result
 he is
a
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 unavoidable cricket man in the world. To
conculde
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conclude
,
uncommon
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 fitness
center
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 can only get more benefits for number one
players
.
Public
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center
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 can not give full satisfaction and every
person
 can not use heavy and modern potential. In ,addition, we can see that nowadays
players
are achieved
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 many
medels
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medals
models
 even the
olympic
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 event.
This
 can possible the main reason
our
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the ministry pay for huge cash for
modernized
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 coaching academy for the top physical activity man. I believe that
this
 positive support should continue to the future generation
as a result
,
players
 would use
top most
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topmost
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 potential in order to they would get more
recoganization
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recognition
recognization
 as well as
medels
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medals
models
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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