Some countries invest in specialized training centers for top athletes rather than in public sports facilities. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Sports
is the primary factor of every nation.
Players
are the pride of every country because they can only make proud to their country.
However
, a fair amount of people think that some countries are put money into
in
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specific practice
centers
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for the top
sports
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person
rather than in public
sports
resources. I think undoubtedly
this
is
a
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positive growth. On the one hand, there are many reasons
for
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why
this
trend is best.
Firstly
, the best
players
are always special for every society because they are only played for
country
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proud and they can get more models and prize to international
competitation
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competition
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. Even top
athlets
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are represent
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the community
that is
why the government is given more focus to
the
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sports
fitness
person
such
as sink money into unusual
tution
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tuition

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center
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for only top competitors.
Furthermore
,
this
kind of
the
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sports
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sportsperson

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person
will need long time practice with
best
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the best

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coacher in order to they will perform with full effort
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, as a result,

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as a result
they can obtain more
medels
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medals
models

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to their own nation.
For example
, many countries are spent a lot of wages on unique
sports
recreational
center
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centre

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such
as
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the top

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top most
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topmost

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equipments
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equipment
types of equipment
pieces of equipment

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,
world
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the world

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best coacher, healthy
nutrition
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nutritious

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foods
also
.
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,
public
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a public

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finess
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fitness

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center
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centre

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is not helpful for
best
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players
due to
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a

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lack of resources and gamer concentration will
loss
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lose

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when they are being
practiced
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practised

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in a public
center
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centre

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.
This
is a good way of encourage
to
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the athletes in order to they can utilize the modern
equipments
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equipment
types of equipment
pieces of equipment

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it is not possible to the common
center
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.
For instance
, one of the best cricket player who
sachin
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Sachin

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tendulkar
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Tendulkar

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had been staying
notable
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physical
excercise
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exercise

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academy during his
traning
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training

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period
in
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many days
as a result
he is
a
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unavoidable cricket man in the world. To
conculde
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conclude

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,
uncommon
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fitness
center
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centre

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can only get more benefits for number one
players
.
Public
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The public

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center
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centre

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can not give full satisfaction and every
person
can not use heavy and modern potential. In ,addition, we can see that nowadays
players
are achieved
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have achieved

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many
medels
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medals
models

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even the
olympic
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Olympic

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event.
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can possible the main reason
our
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the ministry pay for huge cash for
modernized
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coaching academy for the top physical activity man. I believe that
this
positive support should continue to the future generation
as a result
,
players
would use
top most
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topmost

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potential in order to they would get more
recoganization
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recognition
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as well as
medels
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medals
models

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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