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Discipline is an ever increasing problem in modern schools. Some people think that discipline should be the responsibility of teachers,while others think that this is a role of parents. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Some people reckon that teachers are responsible for
discipline
 in
schools
 today; some others believe that students should learn
discipline
by
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from
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 their families. Needless to say, nowadays,
discipline
 has become a major problem in
schools
. I reckon that the process of
discipline
 learning starts
by
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with
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parents
 and continuous in school; remember always
start
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 point has more importance. There are some people who believe that
discipline
 should be learnt during the process of
education
 by teachers and
parents
 are not responsible for their
children
's
behavior
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behaviour
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. In my opinion, teachers are responsible for
discipline
 learning in
schools
 especially primary
schools
 but it doesn’t mean that family environment has no importance. According to the statistics, most of the young lawbreakers in
community
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the community
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 have grown up in an inappropriate environment in their family and they have continued their
education
also
;
therefore
,
children
 should learn
discipline
 at home
first
 and
then
 complete their learning in school.
On the other hand
, some individuals think that learning
discipline
 is one of the duties of
a good
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a good parent
good parents
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parents
. According to the psychologist researches,
children
 have a great potential to learn new things at their
first
 ages before they go to school;
thus
, if
parents
 pay enough attention to learning
discipline
 to their
children
 before they start their
education
, it will be more effective than any other time. In conclusion,
parents
 and
schools
 have considerable duties to learn
discipline
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the discipline
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 to pupils and
children
 and both of them have own role. Eventually, I reckon that learning
discipline
 is one of the good
parents
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parent's
parents'
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 duties and
children
 should know
discipline
 before they begin their
education
 process; meanwhile,
schools
also
 have
own
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their own
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 role in learning
discipline
.
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