Individuals can do nothing to change society. Any new developments can only be brought about by governments and large institutions. How far do you agree or disagree?
Every solitary
have
a responsibility to do develop the country. No one ignored. Change the verb form
has
However
, some people say that the government and lagre
corporation can only bring new growth rather than Correct your spelling
large
inadividuals
. I strongly disagree with Correct your spelling
individuals
individual
this
statement because both government and singles will joint together work for nation developments by bring
new Change the verb form
bringing
Correct your spelling
ideas
ides
. In Correct your spelling
ideas
this
essay, I will explicate my points in the upcoming paragraphs.
On the one hand, there are many reasons to I
against Change the pronoun
me
with
Change preposition
apply
this
statement. First
and foremost, the ministry has a lot of resources such
as money, power and well educated and experience
man. Correct your spelling
experienced
Therefore
, they are able to lead new ideas for state growth and an
individuals Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
also
help to support the ides
. not only support but Correct your spelling
ideas
also
follow too. Secondly
, the cabinet also
should encourage to
their citizens will make a plan for improvements Change preposition
apply
such
as
give award or reward-oriented. Add the preposition
toas
For example
, in Singapore cabinet is given best
planner of the year award from Singapore university students in order to motivate Correct article usage
the best
to
their residents.
Change preposition
apply
On the other hand
, the large companies has
Change the verb form
have
world
best Correct article usage
the world
equipments
, moderate technology machinery and huge capital rather than a sole person. Change the wording
equipment
types of equipment
pieces of equipment
Therefore
, the organisation can use an independent for new plans such
as workforce. Moreover
, both the authority and the institution are given freedom
to their people accompany innovative designs for nation breakthroughs whether possible or not. Add an article
the freedom
For instance
, many developed states are accept
a sole man design to Change the verb form
accept
the improvements purpose
Change to a genitive case
the purpose of the improvements
the purpose of the improvement
such
as in vietnam
ruling party has accepted their Change the capitalization
Vietnam
citizens
thoughts about Change to a genitive case
citizen's
citizens'
reduce
the ground road traffic which is metro train plan.
To conclude, it is often argued whether a person or authority human do for their territory Change the verb form
reducing
expand
. I think we never ignore an individuals proposalChange the form of the verb
expanded
as well as both
are contributing to do for Add the comma(s)
, as well as both,
breakthoughts
. All hands are joint anything will possible.Correct your spelling
breakthroughs
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