Medical services should be run by profit-making companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Whether

healthcare

should be operated by profit-oriented providers is up for debate. I believe there are profound repercussions if

humantarian

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humanitarian

services are

controled

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controlled

by enterprises.

First

and foremost,

this

phenomenon will enlarge the gap between the wealthy and the deprived. If medical systems are designed for being profit chasing, limited manpower and resources will be occupied by the top 1% and

this

will force the poor resort to suffer from curable disease and lower

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possibility

possibiity

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of

survive

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. Countries without public health services

such

as the US,

for example

, is one of the regions where underprivileged people are trapped in a vicious circle of being ill without insurance cover for prohibitive medical bills.

Furthermore

, fundamental researches often involve long-term investment, which may not

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profitable

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, could be dismissed due to funding issues. The new mRNA vaccines for COVID-19,

for example

, took more than 20 years of investment and are lifesavers during

this

pandemic.

On the other hand

, there are various problems for non-profit

healthcare

providers. Financial supports are

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constant challenges. Regions with national health services, even though with

the

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aid from governments, still plagued by

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distribution of service users. Some patients taking the

healthcare

systems for granted, maybe visit

emergency

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unit for less serious symptoms and wear out medical staff.

Subsequently

, doctors and nurses are losing their motivation towards advanced researches and techniques. Taiwan which is famous

of

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affordable health

infrustructure

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infrastructure

,

for instance

, are facing the looming trend of no youngsters in the medicare workforce. In conclusion, governments should seek a balance of profit-oriented and welfare

healthcare

systems to offer the public a sustainable society.