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In spite of advances made in agriculture , many people around the world still go hungry . Why is this the cause ? What can be done about this problem

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However
 ,recently , the
agriculture
 industry has developed , many hungry
people
 have been observed in the
world
 . In the following essay , the reason for
this
 problem and its ' solution will be discussed . The power full reason for observing starveling around the
world
 would be the fact that availability of the advances in
agriculture
 is not possible and comfortable for the whole of the communities and
countries
 .
For instance
 , poverty in some
societies
 and regions has been visited .
Moreover
 , it is impossible to achieve industrialization in horticulture for some public and
countries
 . So , if it is not available to use or be familiar with advances or technological
agriculture
 for
people
 in the
world
such
 as poor areas , hunger will not have been omitted by the
next
 10 or 20 years . A collaboration between the governments and
people
 in the reach
countries
 would be
as
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a perfect solution and a
frankly
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 activity for preventing
people
 from starvation in the
world
 .
For example
 , if some financial
helps
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 are established and don by reach or wealthy
societies
 and governments for other zones in the
world
 , it will be influential to decline hunger in surrounding the
world
 .
Therefore
 , some charitable activities from the reaches can be effective to reduce the starvation issue . In conclusion , despite the fact that there is some development in
agriculture
 , some
societies
 are hungry in the
world
 because of the unavailability of facilities for some reason like poverty .
Furthermore
 , doing some financial help from wealthy
countries
 to other
societies
 will be a profitable solution .
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