Some people think that in this modern world people are getting dependent on each other, while others think that this world makes them more independent of each other. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In
this
present world
, many people
are debating whether or not they are getting more dependent on each other or vice versa. However
, in my opinion, I think the current world
we are living in makes us independent from one another because of how past
affects our current state.
Living dependently Correct article usage
the past
from
each other are currently decreasing due to the innovations and changes in Change preposition
on
this
world
. In the past, people
used to rely from
their friends and families in order to sustain their lives because it is hard to do it by themselves. They rarely have the strength and abilities to Change the preposition
on
upon
fulfill
them due to Change the spelling
fulfil
lack
of resources and money. Correct article usage
a lack
For example
, if students wants
to finish college, they solely rely on their parents to be able to graduate. Change the verb form
want
This
has been a major problem especially
from Add the comma(s)
,especially
the
Correct article usage
apply
third
world
countries.
Meanwhile, because of our continuous evolving
, numerous Replace the word
evolution
people
are getting more independent. It has become an evident choice because of the
number of reasons. Correct article usage
a
First
is the
technology, internet paved the way for researching ideas, solutions and other means to overcome any obstacle that may come. Correct article usage
apply
For instance
, washing machines, microwave ovens and smart phones
have been a constant partner towards making lives easier. Correct your spelling
smartphones
Second
, independent skills are adapted and being taught as early as childhood days, and as a result
, they become more resilient at
any circumstances given. Change preposition
in
Lastly
, the change on
how Change preposition
in
people
think, which is more open minded
, is how it affected the Add a hyphen
open-minded
world
that it created more possibilities that aid people
in becoming self-sufficient. This
sense of individualism are
rather more accepted and seen as a positive change for everybody’s sake which makes it inevitable.
In conclusion, becoming a self-sustained individual will continue to take place and becoming so, will create a lasting positive outcome for everyone.Change the verb form
is
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