Some people think that in this modern world people are getting dependent on each other, while others think that this world makes them more independent of each other. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In
this
present Linking Words
world
, many Use synonyms
people
are debating whether or not they are getting more dependent on each other or vice versa. Use synonyms
However
, in my opinion, I think the current Linking Words
world
we are living in makes us independent from one another because of how Use synonyms
past
affects our current state.
Living dependently Correct article usage
the past
from
each other are currently decreasing due to the innovations and changes in Change preposition
on
this
Linking Words
world
. In the past, Use synonyms
people
used to rely Use synonyms
from
their friends and families in order to sustain their lives because it is hard to do it by themselves. They rarely have the strength and abilities to Change the preposition
on
upon
fulfill
them due to Change the spelling
fulfil
lack
of resources and money. Correct article usage
a lack
For example
, if students Linking Words
wants
to finish college, they solely rely on their parents to be able to graduate. Change the verb form
want
This
has been a major problem Linking Words
especially
from Add the comma(s)
,especially
the
Correct article usage
apply
third
Linking Words
world
countries.
Meanwhile, because of our continuous Use synonyms
evolving
, numerous Replace the word
evolution
people
are getting more independent. It has become an evident choice because of Use synonyms
the
number of reasons. Correct article usage
a
First
is Linking Words
the
technology, internet paved the way for researching ideas, solutions and other means to overcome any obstacle that may come. Correct article usage
apply
For instance
, washing machines, microwave ovens and Linking Words
smart phones
have been a constant partner towards making lives easier. Correct your spelling
smartphones
Second
, independent skills are adapted and being taught as early as childhood days, and Linking Words
as a result
, they become more resilient Linking Words
at
any circumstances given. Change preposition
in
Lastly
, the change Linking Words
on
how Change preposition
in
people
think, which is more Use synonyms
open minded
, is how it affected the Add a hyphen
open-minded
world
that it created more possibilities that aid Use synonyms
people
in becoming self-sufficient. Use synonyms
This
sense of individualism Linking Words
are
rather more accepted and seen as a positive change for everybody’s sake which makes it inevitable.
In conclusion, becoming a self-sustained individual will continue to take place and becoming so, will create a lasting positive outcome for everyone.Change the verb form
is
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