Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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is the best

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for everything. Every person would like to go to

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life back because

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and can not replace

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place

compared to anything.

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, some people think that fathers and mothers should teach their

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children

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a good person of the society while others believe that

school

is the best

place

to learn

this

. viewing from a general perspective, the essay discusses both viewpoints, I personally agree with the former opinion for the following reasons. On the one hand, every

parents

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have the responsibility to do which teach

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their kids

what

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how to become

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good man of the community because a child can

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a lot of time with

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fathers

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the mothers should tell what is

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good behaviour and bad behaviour based on stories, old incident and their own

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experience

and so on.

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the family is one of the key

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for

develop

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the

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healthy and secure society.

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, nowadays all fathers and mothers are taught their babies

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how to behave and respect

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the opposite gender since their kids are in small age due to we can see a lot of harassment

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oftenly

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often

even within

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gender.

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Education

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building is the best location for

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these kinds of activities irrefutably and

this

place

can only show good behaviour and moral value about our life.

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, Education building not only teach knowledge but

also

how to live with good manners

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instance, many developed countries are given best education about moral value since

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garden level and they can practice from

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young age

as a result

, their citizens are being

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gentleman

gentlemen

. To conclude, families have the primary responsibility for practice their babies why

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will be

a good members

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of

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society.

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Nevertheless

, the human can take a lot of good habits, behaviours, manners from schools. In my personal opinion about

this

school

is the appropriate location

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get

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these kinds of fair behaviours

as well as folks

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will be a good man of the nation undoubtedly.