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Most people these days prefer getting news online to reading newspaper or watching tv . Do you think it is a positive development?

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Newspaper
 and television were the only sources of
information
 to the peoples in the
last
 few decades. With the revolution of technology, not only method of
information
 changed but
also
 response time on statement got fast. In the technology era, authentic
information
 and the advantage of online
news
 factors keeping in mind and belief that it is not a positive development.
To begin
 with, the
newspaper
 is an authentic source of
information
: if they mishandle the
content
, they are to be sued on contempt case. So they are more likely to be responsible when they are writing
news
.
In addition
 to that
newspaper
 improve the
language
 of the society.
News
 writers are master in their
language
 field.
As a result
, the redder knowledge of various
language
 improved over a period of time.
Moreover
, they have dedicated column children, which is proven to improve
language
 abilities. Regarding TV channels, they are
also
 bonded by rule and regulation. So they
also
 cannot telecast the forged
content
.
However
,
News
 on the internet is instant. The writer has unlimited freedom to write whatever write on a particular topic. They have only target to catch the viewer quick intention on
news
. Online communication dominating because it is capable to reach the masses within a short time. Since the
content
 of
news
 is
also
 short, so it will suit readers who surf the
news
 on their gazettes. In conclusion, though online
news
 is gaining popularity due to the masses reach to the reader and
also
 have less
content
.
Nevertheless
, they are not providing authentic
information
such
 as
newspaper
 and television.
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