Some people view teenage conflict with their parents as a necessary part of growing up, whilst others see it as something negative which should be avoided. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In today's world children are very conscious of their lifestyle and how they want to lead their life. There could be multiple reasons for a
conflict
between them and their
parents
. It has both negative and positive impacts on the
child
's life. In my view, sometimes the
conflict
with their
parents
might have a positive impact on their
child
.
For example
, in today's world
child
try to approach certain
situation
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in their own way, which can lead to conflicts. But
parents
who might have gone through that situation in the past can guide them easily.
Moreover
, they can give better advice to their
child
regarding the issue and a better way to solve the problem.
However
, sometimes too many conflicts can have negative impacts on the
child
. They can go the wrong path to get things done.
For example
, in certain ,countries their
child
lives their lives
according to
their parent's needs and necessities which leads to mental and physical health problems
to
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their
child
.
But
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the
child
does not have the
authorities
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to speak up and
had
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to live life
according to
their
parents
.
And if
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the
conflict
grows bigger their
child
can take the incorrect path , which can ruin his and his
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in the future. In conclusion, I would say there could be both good
or
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bad effects of
conflict
on a
child
. It depends upon how
parents
treat their
child
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.
Also
, how a
child
takes their
parents
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advice. The
child
can
possible
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listen to their parent's advice in a good or a bad way.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • autonomy
  • individuality
  • emotional intelligence
  • conflict resolution skills
  • persistent
  • unresolved
  • communication gaps
  • rebellious behavior
  • substance abuse
  • mental health issues
  • critical skills
  • deeper understanding
  • family dynamics
  • quest for independence
  • crucial for adulthood
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