Some people view teenage conflict with their parents as a necessary part of growing up, whilst others see it as something negative which should be avoided. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In today's world children are very conscious of their lifestyle and how they want to lead their life. There could be multiple reasons for a
conflict
between them and their parents
. It has both negative and positive impacts on the child
's life.
In my view, sometimes the conflict
with their parents
might have a positive impact on their child
. For example
, in today's world child
try to approach certain situation
in their own way, which can lead to conflicts. But Fix the agreement mistake
situations
parents
who might have gone through that situation in the past can guide them easily. Moreover
, they can give better advice to their child
regarding the issue and a better way to solve the problem.
However
, sometimes too many conflicts can have negative impacts on the child
. They can go the wrong path to get things done. For example
, in certain ,countries their child
lives their lives according to
their parent's needs and necessities which leads to mental and physical health problems to
their Change preposition
for
child
. But
the Correct word choice
However
child
does not have the authorities
to speak up and Fix the agreement mistake
authority
had
to live life Wrong verb form
has
according to
their parents
. And if
the Correct word choice
If
conflict
grows bigger their child
can take the incorrect path , which can ruin his and his parents
Change noun form
parent's
parents'
live
in the future.
In conclusion, I would say there could be both good Replace the word
lives
or
bad effects of Correct word choice
and
conflict
on a child
. It depends upon how parents
treat their child
. Fix the agreement mistake
children
Also
, how a child
takes their parents
advice. The Change noun form
parent's
parents'
child
can possible
listen to their parent's advice in a good or a bad way.Change the word
possibly
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