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Smart phones are being in classrooms more than ever before. Some people think that this is aids the learning process, while others think that it hinders it. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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It is argued that mobile
phones
 are utilized in the classroom which helps the
students
 in learning while others believe that it has many disadvantages. In my opinion, cell
phones
 cause distraction
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as a result
 a poor performance in the class.
To begin
 with, gizmos are a barrier between pupils and education if allowed in the classroom at a high level because nowadays there are a number of applications
such
 as Facebook, Instagram, TikTok which divert the
students
thus
, they are unable to get a good score and ruin their career.
Moreover
, they feel pressure on their mind and body and are prone to detrimental diseases
such
 as depression and anxiety.
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, it has been analysed all over the world that due to excessive use of these devices in the classroom the children face a lot of problems in gaining knowledge as the devices are an obstacle in their path.
On the other hand
, fidgeting gadgets are considerably useful in learning because it provides the platform to the
students
 to learn efficiently and effectively.Individuals can browse anything through these devices on the internet and can collect information.
Besides
this
, there is a number of universities
which
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that
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 provide the classes through online mode and the
students
 can access
it
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them
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 from any part of the world.
For instance
 , at the present the world is suffering from
pandemic
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a pandemic
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 the various universities
provides
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provide
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 online classes. so these
smartphonesphones
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smartphones phones
 connect the
students
 and teacher to share their important information with each other. In conclusion,
although
 there are a number of
the
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apply
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advantages of mobile
phones
 extravagant use of
phones
 in class has a negative impact on the student's life.
Hence
, teacher and parents should make a decision that how much an individual can use it.
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