The rise of convenience food has helped people keep up with the speed of modern lifestyle. What are the advantages of this trend? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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In the present, the number of consumptions in instant

foods

is constantly on the rise. The reason is that people want to continue their modern lifestyle rapidly. From my point of view, I believe that it has more drawbacks than benefits in

this

issue. In

this

essay, I will examine my views before the conclusion is reached. The main reason that supports the disadvantages is that

nutrients

from frozen

foods

are reduced from fresh ones.

In other words

, some

nutrients

are not able to remain in instant food.

For example

, lemon, one of the fruits that have a vitamin c which is a nutrient that has a plethora of benefits to our body, ought to eat as soon as it has been cut in order to absorb its

nutrients

effectively.

Thus

, to make frozen fruits or canned food, it could simply lose its

nutrients

In addition

, producing a myriad of instant

foods

is a cause of globalization. It is undeniable that frozen

foods

need plastic as their packages.

Moreover

, as we can easily see in the convenience store that to have one of the frozen

foods

, it does not just the packages but

also

plastic bags and plastic cutlery that have to produce for customer.

Therefore

, the more individuals consume frozen

foods

, the more pollution that the world has to carry from destroying plastics. In conclusion,

although

convenience

foods

could provide a comfortable lifestyle, I strongly think that the disadvantages of frozen

foods

outweigh the advantages.

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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The rise of convenience food has helped people keep up with the speed of modern lifestyle. What are the advantages of this trend? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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