Watching a live performance such as a play, concert, or sporting event is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The issue of watching events

such

as play, concert or

sporting

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is less exciting than visiting that event has been raising a lot of debates. Some might say that following programs on television have a beneficial effect on

people

like saving their

money

, no limit on what time they can watch it or peaceful atmosphere to relax.

On the contrary

, others insist on the opinion that seeing a live performance is so amazing because they can mingle with the exciting mood with all the

people

in there. Viewing from a general perspective, I personally agree with the former opinion for the following reasons.

To begin

with, watching the event on TV can substantially help young

people

save a lot of things for themself like time or

money

instead

of going to the theatre or museum.

Firstly

,

money

will be kept if youngsters stay at

home

and view

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the broadcast.

For example

, the price of a ticket for coming to see football is very expensive and it is so extravagant to pay for it so that

people

should stay at

home

and watch it on TV to save

money

.

Secondly

,

with

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looking at the screen they would not miss their

favorite

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program and watch

over

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and over as long as they record it.

For instance

, the crowd can record football matches between Vietnam footballers with their competition and can see it when they want and

unlimit

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unlimited

views.

Finally

, observing performance on television at

home

will give youngsters a private atmosphere and not be bothered by someone else so they can relax after a hard-working day by lying down on the sofa and following the programs.

On the other hand

, some of the population think that coming and seeing a live play or concert or sporting is more enjoyable because they can chit chat with the others about the artists or the player or something like that and

besides

they can see their idol clearly.

However

, the ticket which gets a lot of

money

and it is a waste of

money

to buy it with the high prices. In conclusion,

home

-viewing is useful for most

people

because of the convenience

such

as saving

money

and enjoying their time effectively. In my opinion,

instead

of going to see a live concert or sporting, young

people

should stay at

home

and turn on

TV

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to watch it.