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Some people think that economic progress is the only way to measure a country's success, while others that think that there are other factors which can be used to measure a country's success. What are these factors? Which, of all factors, do you think are most important?

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Many people give their own views for measuring
growth
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the growth
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 of a
country
, there is only
mean
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that is
 their economic progress.
However
, there are many other things that
propagates
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 the
ecomony
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economy
 progressive of a
country
. I will discuss all those factors in the forthcoming paragraphs that are counted for
correct
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the correct
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 measurement of
gross
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the gross
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 domestic product of a
country
.
To begin
 with, population and gross national income are the two components that are considered in calculating
growth
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the growth
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 index of
state
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the state
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. But there are other factors that are
also
 should be considered for looking progress of a
country
. These
includes
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include
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 population living below
poverty
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the poverty
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 line, human development index,
availablity
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availability
 of resources,
unemployment
 and many more
another
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other
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 components. In the
next
paragraph
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 I will discuss their importance for measuring a
growth
 rate of a
country
.
Firstly
, it must be looked
that is
 the poor population who is living
under privileged
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underprivileged
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 life.
Secondly
,
human
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the human
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 development index is a number that used to measure how
the
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apply
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people are living their life.
Thirdly
, resources that are required for survival is available in abundance.
Lastly
,
unemployment
 is a condition when
a
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 eligible candidate is unable to get a job. To conclude with for measuring
growth
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the growth
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 of a kingdom various factors are to be considered
instead
 of only economic progress. In my point of view, The most important factor from all of these is
unemployment
. If
unemployment
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the unemployment
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 rate is lower
that
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than
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 state does not depend on
other
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others
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also
 income of the nation surges.
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