Some people think that economic progress is the only way to measure a country's success, while others that think that there are other factors which can be used to measure a country's success. What are these factors? Which, of all factors, do you think are most important?

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Many people give their own views for measuring
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growth
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of a
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, there is only
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that is
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their economic progress.
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, there are many other things that
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the
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economy
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. I will discuss all those factors in the forthcoming paragraphs that are counted for
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measurement of
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domestic product of a
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with, population and gross national income are the two components that are considered in calculating
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index of
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. But there are other factors that are
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should be considered for looking progress of a
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. These
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population living below
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the poverty
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line, human development index,
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availability
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unemployment
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and many more
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components. In the
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I will discuss their importance for measuring a
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rate of a
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, it must be looked
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the poor population who is living
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life.
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,
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development index is a number that used to measure how
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people are living their life.
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, resources that are required for survival is available in abundance.
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,
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is a condition when
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eligible candidate is unable to get a job. To conclude with for measuring
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growth
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the growth
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of a kingdom various factors are to be considered
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of only economic progress. In my point of view, The most important factor from all of these is
unemployment
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. If
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unemployment
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rate is lower
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state does not depend on
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income of the nation surges.
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