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2. Nowadays, there is a trend that media focuses on problems and emergencies rather than positive developments .Some people think that it is harmful to individuals and to society .To what extend do you agree?

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Today
's
media
 is more focusing on negative issues in the
world
 rather than positive growth. Many
people
 believe that it is not good for
the
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society. In my opinion,
media
 should
focuses
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focus
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negative
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on negative
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 as well as positive impacts
also
.
This
 will aware the public what is happening in the
world
.
This
 essay will discuss
it's
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its
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 both positive and negative growth in forthcoming paragraphs
Firstly
,
media
 plays
crucial
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 role in
today
's
world
.
Media
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 should not hide negative
news
 from the public. Negative
news
bring
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brings
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 awareness among
people
 of the state.
For example
, In Delhi,
Nirbhaya
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the Nirbhaya
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 case aware the young women that they should commute by government authorised bus
not
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 by private transport.
Hence
, negative
news
 aware
the
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people
.
Secondly
,
media
 should
also
 display positive
news
 to the population. It will bring positivity
among
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to
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public
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the public
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. There are many shows
such
 as motivational speech, Ted talks,
spritual
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spiritual
 events which bring positivity among
people
.
For instance
, one of my cousins is really inspired by
the
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Robert Clive he is
a
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the
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 best motivational speaker. He helps to solve the problems with his valuable speech. My cousin is
a
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 best problem solver.
Consequently
, positive
news
are
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is
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must
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a must
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 in
today
's hectic schedule which
bring
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brings
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 calmness among
people
. To conclude, In my opinion, positive and negative
news
 has
own
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its own
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 importance in
today
's
world
. With
this
people
 would aware
about
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of
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 the crimes and solution to solve these types of crimes
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