2.Nowadays, there is a trend that media focuses on problems and emergencies rather than positive developments .Some people think that it is harmful to individuals and to society .To what extend do you agree?

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media
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is more focusing on negative issues in the
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rather than positive growth. Many
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believe that it is not good for
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society. In my opinion,
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negative
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as well as positive impacts
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will aware the public what is happening in the
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both positive and negative growth in forthcoming paragraphs
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,
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plays
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role in
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should not hide negative
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from the public. Negative
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bring
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awareness among
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of the state.
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, In Delhi,
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case aware the young women that they should commute by government authorised bus
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by private transport.
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people
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,
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should
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display positive
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to the population. It will bring positivity
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public
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. There are many shows
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as motivational speech, Ted talks,
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spiritual
events which bring positivity among
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.
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, one of my cousins is really inspired by
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Robert Clive he is
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best motivational speaker. He helps to solve the problems with his valuable speech. My cousin is
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best problem solver.
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, positive
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are
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in
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's hectic schedule which
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calmness among
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. To conclude, In my opinion, positive and negative
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has
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importance in
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people
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would aware
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the crimes and solution to solve these types of crimes
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