It's generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for music and sport, and others are not. However, it's sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both ideas by giving your opinion.
In today's modern era,
people
do believe that individuals
are having certain talentstalents
Correct your spelling
talents talents
such
as music and sports by birth
. On the other side, some believe that it is wrong myths. But it is a fact
that,
a child can be trained to become a good sportsman or a Remove the comma
apply
musician
. In my opinion, both
sides are correct. In this
essay, I will discuss both
views by giving an example
.
First
and foremost, It is a true fact
that some children
born with special talents
such
as dancing, singing, magician, artist and so on. In
addition
, Because individuals
with special talents
start showing their speciality just within a few months after born. For
example
, very popular and amazing Indian singer Ms Neha Kakkar has stolen many people
's hearts because of her great singing quality. However
, She is very famous all around the world. She started singing when she was only 1.5 years old by just watching her sister singing. So I completely agree that there are some children
's having special knowledge
by birth
.
On the other hand
, some people
oppose this
view by stating that this
is a wrong myth. In
addition
to this
, they do not believe in this
fact
because those people
who are trying to prove this
just a rumour they have never seen any talents
like this
in their life. It is a positive claim that students can obtain knowledge
about different field of their interest Because Nowadays, there are many coaching institutions are available where parents can enrol their sons and daughters to prepare them to become a successful sportsperson or a musician
. For
example
, Celebrity cricketer
Mr Virat Kohli got coaching from the mumbai
institution to become a successful Change the capitalization
Mumbai
cricketer
and a coach.
To summarize, different individuals
have several perspectives to analyze and understand the talent
and knowledge
in successful children
's. But as per myprespective
, I do believe that many Correct your spelling
my perspective
children
's do
born with amazing talent
.In today's modern era, people
do believe that individuals
are having certain talentstalents
Correct your spelling
talents talents
such
as music and sports by birth
. On the other side, some believe that it is wrong myths. But it is a fact
that,
a child can be trained to become a good sportsman or a Remove the comma
apply
musician
. In my opinion, both
sides are correct. In this
essay, I will discuss both
views by giving an example
.
First
and foremost, It is a true fact
that some children
born with special talents
such
as dancing, singing, magician, artist and so on. In
addition
, Because individuals
with special talents
start showing their speciality just within a few months after born. For
example
, very popular and amazing Indian singer Ms Neha Kakkar has stolen many people
's hearts because of her great singing quality. However
, She is very famous all around the world. She started singing when she was only 1.5 years old by just watching her sister singing. So I completely agree that there are some children
's having special knowledge
by birth
.
On the other hand
, some people
oppose this
view by stating that this
is a wrong myth. In
addition
to this
, they do not believe in this
fact
because those people
who are trying to prove this
just a rumour they have never seen any talents
like this
in their life. It is a positive claim that students can obtain knowledge
about different field of their interest Because Nowadays, there are many coaching institutions are available where parents can enrol their sons and daughters to prepare them to become a successful sportsperson or a musician
. For
example
, Celebrity cricketer
Mr Virat Kohli got coaching from the mumbai
institution to become a successful Change the capitalization
Mumbai
cricketer
and a coach.
To summarize, different individuals
have several perspectives to analyze and understand the talent
and knowledge
in successful children
's. But as per my perspective, I do believe that many children
's do born
with amazing Change the verb form
bear
talent
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