Some people prefer full-time jobs because they offer stability. Other people prefer casual jobs because of the freedom they offer. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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job

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is part of every people

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and some

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full-time while others choose part-time because

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kind of people needs freedom.

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essay discusses both viewpoints and

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-time jobs because they are wanted a secure

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life style

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means steadily salary. They have a lot of

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flexible

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of folks can stay one

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to their entire

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until retirement.

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, according to the survey said that more than 80% of the population can not like to change their

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casual employment because

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type of population

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satisfaction rather than anything

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, they do not stay permanent employment.

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community is changed their

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often when they will fell

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work

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is being bore

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while they will move

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profession. To conclude, undoubtedly each and every man needs

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for their satisfying needs and wants.

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, the permanent

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is given more benefit rather than flexible

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. I think steadily

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generation because we are living in

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era, we need more money

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fulfill

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with

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our basic needs and sophistication

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therefore

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is the best idea for everyone and

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trend might increase in future days.

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Paragraph 1 - Introduction

Sentence 1 - Background statement
Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

Sentence 1 - Summary
Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.5

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

265 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

job stability
financial security
permanent employment
career growth
job flexibility
work-life balance
diversification of skills
autonomy
temporary employment
independent work conditions
9-to-5 schedule
health insurance
retirement plans
paid vacation
job satisfaction

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