Some people prefer full-time jobs because they offer stability. Other people prefer casual jobs because of the freedom they offer. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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is part of every people
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and some
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full-time while others choose part-time because
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kind of people needs freedom.
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essay discusses both viewpoints and
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, I would be given my personal opinion.
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with, the main reason is the folks would like to choose
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-time jobs because they are wanted a secure
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life style
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means steadily salary. They have a lot of
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as family commitments
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, they never thought about
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flexible
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in order to
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of folks can stay one
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to their entire
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in other words
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until retirement.
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, according to the survey said that more than 80% of the population can not like to change their
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due to various reasons
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as high salary, Reputation, and social status.
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, some folks are liked
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casual employment because
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type of population
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considered
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satisfaction rather than anything
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therefore
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, they do not stay permanent employment.
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, in
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community is changed their
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often when they will fell
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work
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is being bore
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while they will move
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profession. To conclude, undoubtedly each and every man needs
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a profession
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for their satisfying needs and wants.
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, the permanent
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is given more benefit rather than flexible
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. I think steadily
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is better for
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generation because we are living in
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the modern
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era, we need more money
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fulfill
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with
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our basic needs and sophistication
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therefore
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,
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is the best idea for everyone and
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trend might increase in future days.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • job stability
  • financial security
  • permanent employment
  • career growth
  • job flexibility
  • work-life balance
  • diversification of skills
  • autonomy
  • temporary employment
  • independent work conditions
  • 9-to-5 schedule
  • health insurance
  • retirement plans
  • paid vacation
  • job satisfaction
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