In some countries a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A highly controversial issue today relates to whether to have an unequal income model for the

people

of some countries

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involved with

this

model or not. In

this

essay, I am going to examine

this

question from both points of view and

then

explain my belief... There are

people

who argue that

benefits

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the benefits

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of being able to earn more than six figures

creates

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an environment for those who have ambitions but not only for good of themselves, for good of

people

.

This

notion

is considerably outweigh

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its disadvantages. The main reason for believing

this

is that

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comforts

and the benefits that are provided by the

people

who

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possessed

contemporary

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lifestyle. It is

also

possible to say that having

a

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freedom of making more money than other individuals

also

as seen as gaining status in

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society by

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most

of

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the

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people

. One good illustration of

this

is the

people

who are capable to invent great things in many different aspects of life but not doing it due to

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of not being rewarded or inadequately rewarded.

On the other hand

, others believe that inequality of income is responsible for almost every

chanllenging

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challenging

and destructive consequences of life’s itself.

People

often have

this

opinion because they feel stressed out, tired even exhausted

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almost everything that life brings to them. A

second

point is that

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people

has

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lost the trust of their own

people

and the inevitable competition in every phase of their lives feels

them

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like running a marathon for whole their lives. In the

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I believe both arguments have their merits. On balance,

however

, I feel that today’s systems, governments and the dynamics of the business world

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starting to make life harder

rahher

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rather

than supposedly making it easier with their complexity for all of us.