Write about the following topic The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Health

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is an essential component of a human's life.

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, there are some people who think that

health

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status is going to decline in

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years. I completely agree with

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statement because

sedentary

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of sedentary

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ifestyle

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lifestyle

and antibiotic resistance.

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, due to the advent of modern technology, many home appliances are available in markets which reduce the

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of physical works in everyone's life so they may not be able to burn extra pounds from their body ar which can be accumulated

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, depending on the public transport minimises the scope of walking along with excessive consumption of fatty foods result in many lifestyle diseases.

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, it has been noted that

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the average

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body weight of human being has been increasing, eventually, they may end up

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apply

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having some serious

health

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issues

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since

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the excessive use of pesticides, chemicals and antibiotic on both vegetables and animals products cause many

organism

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organisms

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became developed antibiotic resistance.

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, we cannot eradicate any kinds of infection as we reached its edge.

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Covid-19

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the Covid-19

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pandemic outbreak hardly controlled as there

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no feasible medications.

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, pollution is increasing at

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alarming rate throughout the world.

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, mankind would be affected in many ways,

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as poor air quality, lack of water sanitation, and soil pollution. By seeing these scenarios.

situation

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the situation

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in the foreseeable future. men's

health

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would be in danger In conclusion, many people believe that

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health

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the health

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condition of mankind will decline in

coming

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the coming

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future. I strongly agree with the view since

ifestyle

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lifestyle

and modern technology

make

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makes

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them sick.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 7.5

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