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Governments are often blamed for spending too much money on projects to protect wildlife while ignoring other problems. Some people believe that governments must prioritize the needs of their citizens above all else. To what extent do you agree?

#governments #money #projects #wildlife #people #prioritize #citizens
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 the presented line graph we can see
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the percentage
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 of internet
users
 in three different countries which are
USA
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Mexico
 and
Canada
. Information varies between 1999 and 2009. We surely can see that some amount of the
users
 in each country has grown over the period shown.
Although
, as we can observe,
Canada
 has experienced the fastest growth in the whole period of
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Internet usage. Comparing
Mexico
 to
USA
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the USA
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 and
Canada
 I can summarize that these two countries had more access to the network. In 1999 percentage of the
users
 in
United
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 States was about 20
percent
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, but in
Canada
 and
Mexico
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 the same indicators were twice and
more
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lower. But in 2005, the indicators increased to 70
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, while the figure for
Mexico
 just reached over 25
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. In conclusion Id like to say that the
most high
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 percentage of
users
 were observed in
Canada
 (about 100
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), while
proportion
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the proportion
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 of Canadians and Americans was about 80 and 40
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.
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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