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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs ( for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children ) to what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some people believe that free social
activities
 Should be an obligatory part of highschools programs. While 
Students
 taking part in these
activities
 may face some unexpected issues. I agree with
this
 assertion to some extent.In
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 I am going to discuss some Negative and positive Influences of these
activities
 on 
students
. On the one hand, attending free public services will bring great benefits to
highschool
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students
.
Firstly
,
these kind
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 of
activities
encourage
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students
 to assist their
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fellowmen
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fellowmans
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fellowmen
fellowman
fellow man
 in different situations. Volunteers not only can boost their social knowledge through these ways but
also
 they can improve their crafts and discover their hidden talents, which has
great
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 influence on their future job position.
Furthermore
,
students
 can learn both how to socialize with people and enhance their Contribution
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society and play a momentous role in their society.
On the other hand
, the most considerable trouble
affects
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students
 when
participate
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 in public
activities
 is the shortage of time. Particularly, they may
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 their concentration on their lessons, even lack
of
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leisure time because of spending too much time
for
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 community services.
In addition
, there are some obligatory services, which do not suit
with
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everyone.
For instance
, teaching younger
students
 leaving in
another cities
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another city
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 that volunteers have to go far away
for
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this
 regard or working for a charity, which is located
at
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the
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  mountainous places, which can make a lot of trouble for volunteers.
Therefore
, all of these types of
activities
 do not fit
to
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everyone. According to the
above mentioned
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analysis
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 I am inclined to believe that we should organise more unpaid compulsory community programs for
highschool
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students
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