Some people think that women should not be allowed to work in the police force. Do you agree or disagree?

Gender

bias is obsolete. Over the

last

decades,

gender

equality has become increasingly prevalent including at work.

Therefore

, in my view, both

women

and men have the same right to get a job in the law enforcement field. There are two reasons to support my opinion.

Firstly

, I believe that to be able to work in the

police

force, people should obtain the required skills

such

as analytical skill and critical thinking. Those skills are vital to investigate the crime and scrutinise the information in order to file the case. A stand out example of

this

is a typical serious crime

such

as murder. In order to find evidence

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is legit, a

police

officer needs to be able to identify and analyse the crime scene.

This

cannot be defined simply by

gender

. The

next

thing to consider is education. For sure, there is no rule related to special

gender

to be accepted to study in a

police

academy. In fact,

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gender

are welcomed to apply. In Indonesia,

for example

, more than 30% of students in the

police

academy are

women

. It is now becoming more and more common to have some high-rank officers who are

women

. I think

this

is

also

related to the needs since the suspects or even the villains can be

women

too.

Consequently

, in some Middle East countries

such

as the United Arab Emirates and

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the woman culprits can only be checked by woman officers related to their law. Taking everything into consideration, indeed it is necessary to allow

women

to work

as

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a

police

force. Skills and education are more crucial to be considered than just

gender

. Especially nowadays when both and

women

are equally important in

the

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society.