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Some people think that women should not be allowed to work in the police force. Do you agree or disagree?

#people #women #work #police #force
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 bias is obsolete. Over the
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 decades,
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 equality has become increasingly prevalent including at work.
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, in my view, both
women
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 and men have the same right to get a job in the law enforcement field. There are two reasons to support my opinion.
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, I believe that to be able to work in the
police
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 force, people should obtain the required skills
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 as analytical skill and critical thinking. Those skills are vital to investigate the crime and scrutinise the information in order to file the case. A stand out example of
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 is a typical serious crime
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 as murder. In order to find evidence
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 is legit, a
police
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 officer needs to be able to identify and analyse the crime scene.
This
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 cannot be defined simply by
gender
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. The
next
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 thing to consider is education. For sure, there is no rule related to special
gender
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 to be accepted to study in a
police
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 academy. In fact,
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gender
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 are welcomed to apply. In Indonesia,
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, more than 30% of students in the
police
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 academy are
women
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. It is now becoming more and more common to have some high-rank officers who are
women
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. I think
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 is
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 related to the needs since the suspects or even the villains can be
women
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 too.
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, in some Middle East countries
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 as the United Arab Emirates and
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 the woman culprits can only be checked by woman officers related to their law. Taking everything into consideration, indeed it is necessary to allow
women
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 to work
as
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 a
police
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 force. Skills and education are more crucial to be considered than just
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. Especially nowadays when both and
women
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 are equally important in
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society.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inherent equality
  • law enforcement
  • empathy
  • gender-based violence
  • community relations
  • diversity
  • team performance
  • systemic gender bias
  • physical requirements
  • culture of masculinity
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