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In some developing countries, it is difficult to get good teachers to work in rural areas which can have a negative impact on the education of children in those rural communities. Why do you think good teachers do not want to work in rural areas in developing countries? What could be done to solve this problem?

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qualified
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academics. There are many reasons that a good teacher does not willing to do
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 with, most of the
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 in rural schools. Because, In the cities, they get better
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, infrastructure in the schools. Cities provide lots of benefits
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 in villages. Due to lack of
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 as electricity power cut, impure water.
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, working conditions are
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always better than in rural
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 like lifestyle.
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 90% of qualified
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 are like to
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 in metropolitan
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 because of a better lifestyle.
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, the above-mentioned issues can be rectified by taking certain measures.
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accommodation near the institute and can
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 provide transportation
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. So,
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,
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 should provide good working
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 as projectors, laptops and good infrastructure.
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, the government should motivate
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 by increasing the salary of rural area's
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. By
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, more and more assistant will willing to do
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areas
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. To conclude, In my opinion,
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 are getting better
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 in metropolitan
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 than
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areas
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 so they will not like to do the job in backward
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 issue can be solved by providing better
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 as infrastructure, working conditions, good salary than the teacher will definitely do
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 in rural
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