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As children becomes adults , the social behaviour changes in some ways , what are the main differences between young children ‘ social behaviour and that of adults ? To what extent are changes that take place good ?

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It is a very true fact that when children grow into adults their social activities will change in some ways . There are many differences between them about social behaviour and it plays a significant role to a large extent about their good changes . In terms of differences , teenagers are not mature enough take to take any decisions and to hold any responsibilities because they put steps just into the outer world and
also
 they do not have a sense of right or wrong thing .
On the contrary
 , adults have matured persons who easily face many problems in their
life
 they have ample
life
 experience than young toddlers .
Additionally
 , they earn themselves and take responsibilities in their
life
 with a happy face .
Furthermore
, they frequently join family or social gatherings in order to make good relationships with others ,
however
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 offsprings are reluctant to do that because they do not understand its importance and
also
 they have a less mutual understanding as compared to adults . Whereas there are some advantages to children to take risks and adventure in their
life
 which helps to boost their confidence level ,
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consequently
 it grows their personal and professional development . For an instance, a company and organisation change management strategies due to technological advancement . These are flexible to accept to changes that come in a professional career which helps to be self-confident and flexible . In conclusion , there are so many differences between toddlers and adult ' s social behaviour
such
 as younger are less mature than older ones . These changes greatly help to move forward in their
life
 as they improve their confidence level .
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