All education and healthcare should be funded by the government and free for everyone. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Education and healthcare is an imperative part of every nation. Masses believe that it should be free of cost and should be funded by a regime of every country. I partially agree with
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notion, because anything which is free of cost become valueless.
This
essay will articulate both the views along with my perception.
To begin
with, every citizen has equal rights to gain the benefits of education and health
services
.
Firstly
, the government need
taxes
to provide various
services
.
Secondly
, to complete the needs of the public, the majority of
taxes
comes from industries, healthcare and educational sectors.
For example
, according to a Harvard University report, in the UK health sectors provide 27 per cent
taxes
to the ruling regime. The
goverment
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can provide healthcare insurance to an in100re by the government may affect the economic cycle of the country.
On the contrary
, some
people
believe that many below the poverty line masses don't get proper education and proper health
services
. So to give a biased
service
, the government should provide free
service
to everyone.
Although
rich
people
want better
service
, there should be equal distribution of
service
between high class and low-class
people
. To sum up, in my I partially agree to above give topic. The
goverment
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should provide free insurance packages and educational
services
to the needy and
also
take
taxes
from high-class
people
to balance the economy of the nation.
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