Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Undoubtedly, recent years have seen numerous changes in the terms of human health. The argument as to whether or not the amelioration of new amusement buildings will enhance the optimal health of humans of our society has been metamorphosed into a moot point. Notwithstanding

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discourse delves into both standpoints

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and

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will put forward my own perspective,

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. Apparently, the exponents that

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that by exaggerating the sporting grounds we can bring a proliferating change in

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health of the human sapiens – have their justification. The rationale behind their reasoning is might due to the fact that people can be motivated to work out if the authorities render them an appropriate space

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does not only avail them entertainment and chances of socialization

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but

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bestows

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to allure a majority of individuals. To epitomize, according to one survey by the Guardian Newspaper in the USA, in 2009, 30% of

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fitness level was boosted by creating

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new hundreds of fitness

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, vindication for expansion of athletic

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kind of development has

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result on wellness, be absolutely right? Certainly, it follows that it takes

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dedication and complete

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awareness

of what medical setbacks the world is facing presently, what mankind can do for preventative steps as well as what the panacea

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helpful to halting

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all menace of

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lifestyle.

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, the education regarding bad fat, good fat, normal calories value, pitfalls of consuming excessive

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fast foods

specifically in an audio-visual form namely: magazines, news channels, and postures on a street can definitely spread

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welcoming tips to the community.

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, a human race can follow the guidelines and can still be fit without visiting sports grounds and wasting time and remuneration on travelling.

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, justification for other solutions. To conclude, having explored both viewpoints, I, personally consent to the hilt that there should be enough

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and a fully developed sports complex;

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, the

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knowledge

and edification of how to restrict detrimental effects of being unhealthy and non-active demand more

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attentive

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steps

from the governments.