Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Few individuals think that it is always better to
work
in tuff
time when they are running short on cash or it's an unsatisfactory Add an article
a tuff
the tuff
job
. But on the other hand
, few think it's always good to try and focus on improving the situation
. In my ,opinion it is always better to improve rather than stuck with a situation
. In this
notion, I will be discussing both views regarding the essay.
To begin
with, if a person learns to find happiness and can able to control their mind in any situation
,then
they will be happy and can enjoy their life in any situation
. Moreover
, it is always better to adjust to the environments as most of the time we cannot control or get away from the negative atmosphere. For example
, most of the employees who do the job
in IT company are able to ignore the pressure from the management and enjoy their work
what they do even though they are paid less. They learn to find happiness in any situation
.
On the other hand
, being in an area without respect and satisfaction often make the individual move away. They always motivated to learn and crack the negative atmosphere. For example
, the famous cricketer dhoni started his profession as a TT in railway and later quit that job
when he felt discomfort with the job
. Later, he joined the Indian cricket team and become the captain of the team. This
is all because of hard work
and a positive approach to change something.
In conclusion, even if people are happy to adjust and find a positive vibe anytime, I believe, for actual well being, it is better to be in a peaceful environment and work
hard to achieve it.Submitted by ankitsharma.ank06 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite