In many countries today, parents are able to choose to send their children to single-sex schools or co-educational schools. Some people think that children going to single-sex schools have disadvantages later in life. To what extent do you agree

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Nowadays,there are many different
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as single-gender
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and mix-
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all over the world, so that parents could choose which kind of
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that their kids should go into. Some people hold the opinion fo
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if the kids went to the single-gender
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might have negative effects in their
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. In my point of view, I would say I disagree with
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. There are several reasons to support my view.
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with, I know many people they are graduated from single-sex
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, most of them are doing excellent in life.
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, one of my friends now is in her early 50. she graduated from femail
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32 years ago , and she has a wonderful life. She gets a good job and had some excellent achievements in her life after
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as she married a good man, has promoted to be a
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manager in her job and
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she became a captain in a golf club.
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, I believe children who graduated from single-sex
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have more achievements in their
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because the single-sex
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provide the best environment for the students.
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, it avoids the students get into boys and girls relationship too early
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they can more focus on what they studying, as a
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the children who graduated in single-sex
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have better
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especially for them to gain the hight knowledge for the present days requested. To sum up, I believe that if the children who graduated in single-sex
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have more advantages in their
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than in mix-sex
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gender diversity
  • social interaction
  • real-world preparation
  • gender stereotypes
  • academic performance
  • healthy competition
  • personal and professional settings
  • reinforce
  • collaborate
  • representative environment
  • promote gender equality
  • break down stereotypes
  • social pressures
  • academic concentration
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