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Road accidents are more frequent these days and claim many lives each year. As a result, some people suggest that drivers should take regular driving tests throughout their lives, rather than one single driving test, to improve the situation. What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of repeat driving tests? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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The
number
 of automobiles on roads is increasing rapidly these days which is aligned with the
number
 of road
accidents
.
Consequently
, some authorities opine that all driving licence holders must take a driving
test
 periodically, rather than taking it only once in their life. The following essay will discuss both the positive and negative sides of the repeat driving
test
. Personally, I believe that
this
 process has more benefits than drawbacks. It is undeniable that taking a driving
test
 each year or so would have some distinct disadvantages for people. One of the major drawbacks is the time and preparation it would require.
In addition
, people would have to pay every time to take the
test
.
Finally
, they
also
 believe that it would cost more for the government, as they must provide additional manpower in the driving
test
 centres. Despite all the negative aspects, performing a driving
test
 on an annual basis or so would have some significant benefits for everybody.
Firstly
, by having a repeat driving
test
, each
driver
 would be updated with all driving regulations.
Secondly
, drivers would be more cautious and more careful when they drive, as their license will be checked regularly.
Thirdly
, it will reduce the
number
 of traffic
accidents
, because the
driver
's physical condition would
also
 be checked as a part of the
test
.
For example
, each
driver
's eyesight would be examined as some
driver
 might have problems with their views which may cause
accidents
.
Thus
 repeat driving
test
 will drastically reduce road
accidents
. In conclusion, conducting a driving
test
 periodically indeed has some drawbacks, but I do believe that it has more benefits for everybody. By taking the
test
 regularly, people will have more awareness of their driving style which will reduce the
number
 of road
accidents
 to a great extent.
Submitted by Manpreet Toor on

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