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the number of students studying science is constantly declining. what do you think are the causes and effects on our society.

#students #science #effects #society
Science
,
such
 as astronomy and biology, is of paramount importance
knowldege
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knowledge
 to learn by
people
, regardless of their age and level of education. These days, the number of pupils who are learning
science
subject
 at school is decreasing at an alarming rate.
This
 essay will discuss the cause of
this
trend
 and its impact
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on
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 the citizen.
Firstly
, one of the
cause
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 of
this
 phenomenon is the emergence of new occupations which are considered more appealing. By and large, there is a myriad of novel professions
which
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 are considered
required
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 less effort in the modern world
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now days
nowdays
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. Take social media influencer which is currently mushrooming in my country as an example. In fact,
people
 only requires
an excellent intrapersonal skills
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, which are often considered easier to
learned
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 than
science
.
As a result
, more and more young generation tend to have less interest in studying
science
 and prefer to learn communication skills
instead
.
Moreover
,
science
 is considered
as
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 complex
subject
 to learn by some
people
. Generally speaking, it
is often involves
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aplethora
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a plethora
 of formulas and unfamiliar names which are difficult to understand easily by
student
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the student
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.
For instance
, in chemistry
subject
, young
people
are insist
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 to remember the different names of liquid substances.
Consequently
,
this
 condition
is undoubtedly make
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 children nowadays less interested in learning
the
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science
further
. Obviously, there are some detrimental impacts presented by the decline of interest in exploring
science
subject
 in
the
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society. One of them is there would be less invention in the future because many young
generation
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generations
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 put their interest in another school subjects,
such
 as arts. Clearly, a lot of extraordinary findings
which
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invented in the past are mostly contributed by
science
. Perhaps a good example of
this
 is the electric lamp, which invented by Sir Thomas Alva Edison in the 19th century. Another adverse effect is there would be no
science
 at school curriculum.
In other words
,
science
subject
 would eventually
vanished
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 in the near future since there would be no
people
 who would like to pursue a degree in
science
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the science
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 program.
This
 demand,
however
, would eventually reduce a significant number
science
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 teachers and establish a zero demand in studying
science
 in the future. All in all,
science
 is currently experiencing a downward
trend
 in its popularity nowadays. The appearance of novel and promising job
carrer
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career
 and the complexity of the
subject
are
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considerend
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considered
 the main causes of
this
trend
. If
this
trend
 is going to continue, there would be
lack
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on
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 invention and extinction of
science
 in the
long-run
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.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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