Some people think that the government should spend as much money as possible on protecting the environment. Others think this money should be spent on other things such as education and healthcare. Which one of these opinions do you agree with?

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Nowadays, the government spends a great amount of
money
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to protect the
environment
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.
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, a number of people believe that they should invest more
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other things like education and healthcare. I strongly disagree that it should be spent on other things
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of the
environment
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of all, we are the ones polluting the atmosphere and killing our
world
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. We are the ones that have contributed to the rise in global temperatures over the
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century by carbon dioxide emissions, the use of natural gas and oil, deforestation, and a variety of other factors. If we pay attention, we can see a clear picture of how our actions have a clear impact on our planet.
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of our acts and carelessness, natural disasters are becoming more frequent. It is past time for us to start caring for the
environment
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by spending as much
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as possible to keep it safe. The
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thing that comes to mind when I think about the ecosystem is how much we depend on it. It provides the most important thing to
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plant, "oxygen," as well as food for it to thrive. It's like having a family mother. A family without a mother is unthinkable to us. We understand how much a family loses when a female figure known as
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a mother
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is absent. The
world
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provides us with everything we need in our day-to-day lives. When we consider human needs,
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as food, clothing, shelter, and medicine, we can see that the
world
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meets all of them. It is
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our responsibility to take care of the thing that provides so much. So, in order to protect the
world
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, we should invest as much as possible in its well-being. In conclusion,
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is important for living a healthy life because it allows us to buy the things we need the most.
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, if the
environment
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which we
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the most is polluted
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of our negligence,
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has little value.
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, we need your help to protect the
environment
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and keep its best interests in mind.
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