Many people have a close relationship with their pets. These people treat their birds, cats, or other animals as members of their family. In your opinion, are such relationships good? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Nowadays, almost every person prefers to keep a pet at their home and share a special bond with them. Some people are so closed to them that their pets get treatment
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as their family member. In my opinion,
this
is the right approach towards them as they equally need love and care same as humans,
however
, it should not be forgotten that animals can
turns
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into a danger at times. There are numerous reasons
to
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why do people share
special
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a special

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bond with their pets and have adopted them to be a part of their family.
Firstly
, spending valuable time with animals can turn into
best
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the best

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source of joy and happiness. They have
a
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the

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purest soul
in
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on

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this
planet and undoubtedly if treated well they can turn into stress buster for us.
Secondly
, pets can teach our kids a sense of responsibility and can act as a protector for them. To exemplify, a child can learn to take care of them by timely feeding them, taking them for a walk and
such
activities will surely build them up into a responsible child in future.
Furthermore
, in
perspective
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the perspective

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of treating them like a family member, they are as equivalent as a child and should not be illtreated in anyways.
Moreover
, they are
most
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trustworthy creatures on earth and can turn into
safeguard
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a safeguard

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for humans in difficult situations.
However
, it is crucial to understand that their
behavior
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with everyone might not be
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the same

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and
thus
, it is necessary to keep others protected and safe.
For instance
,
many a times
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many times
many a time

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people take their dogs for a walk without a leash which can risk other’s life. To conclude,
well-trained
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the well-trained
a well-trained

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pet can
also
turn into
a
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apply

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danger sometimes,
nevertheless
, it is good to form a family relationship with them as they are
most
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the most

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loyal and lovable creature on
this
earth.
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