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In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Fast-
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food
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 chains are the most convenient store to
order
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food
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. In other countries, it is noted to have a higher percentage of
people
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 who suffered from
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 because of
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. I certainly agree that government officials should put a higher
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 on
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food
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 restaurants.
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 with, fast
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 stores are everywhere.
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 it is known that processed foods are unhealthy, majority of the
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 still
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 a dish from them.
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, aside from being fastly prepared, it can be ordered at the convenience of your home.
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 is one of the reasons why there is an increasing number of
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 who have
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 problems and mostly morbid obesity.
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, most
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processed
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 foods have unhealthy ingredients in
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 to preserve them for a long period. When it cooked and started to ingest by
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, all the preserved ingredients are stacked in the body which cause obesity and other
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.
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, due to
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 reason, the government should impose a higher
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 on
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 kind of
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. For that, it may lessen the
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 problems of the countries.
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, if
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food
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 has a high
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, more
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 will prefer to cook
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 at home rather than buying at
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food
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 restaurants. Like in gulf countries, their government put high taxes on
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food
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 restaurants alone to decrease the obese population in their country.
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,
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 will be eliminated by eating healthy and home-cooked
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. In conclusion, eating too much process
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 can bring
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 issues to one's body due to preserved ingredients added. And I certainly agree that local officials should impose higher
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 in
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 to prevent
illnesses
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 in the community.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • public health
  • obesity
  • diabetes
  • heart disease
  • health outcomes
  • healthcare costs
  • consumer behavior
  • socio-economic backgrounds
  • ethical implications
  • public health campaigns
  • subsidies
  • regulations
  • nutritional content
  • healthier food options
  • government intervention
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